I quite liked it! My only criticism is with the drawing of the horse in the second panel of the third page. The leg that he's gesturing with kind of looks like it's bending backwards. It might work better if he had both hooves on the wheel, or something.
I've seen a lot of work published in big deal anthologies that wasn't this good. You should send this out and see what kind of response you get!
August 22 2007, 03:56:43 UTC 4 years ago
If I was to make one complaint, it would be that the unicorn's mane should have been blowing in the wind while they drove!
Still, very well done!
August 23 2007, 00:23:00 UTC 4 years ago
oh and thanks for liking it!
August 23 2007, 02:03:17 UTC 4 years ago
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August 23 2007, 00:26:55 UTC 4 years ago
August 22 2007, 05:20:53 UTC 4 years ago
I've seen a lot of work published in big deal anthologies that wasn't this good. You should send this out and see what kind of response you get!
August 23 2007, 00:26:27 UTC 4 years ago
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August 23 2007, 06:14:40 UTC 4 years ago
--sophi
August 24 2007, 01:24:18 UTC 4 years ago
August 24 2007, 01:25:42 UTC 4 years ago
Anonymous
October 8 2007, 19:04:08 UTC 4 years ago
Great story line
Everytime I read one of your comics I crack up laughing. Also very well drawn.Anonymous
June 7 2008, 03:12:57 UTC 3 years ago
Lame.
Not funny at all. A total wank.Nice and fucking LONG, though. So -- unfunny AND long.
Big fail.
August 5 2010, 04:07:14 UTC 1 year ago
Well, I for one have the ability to maintain my attention for five whole pages and I thought it was funny.
Also, is the cop an Orc?