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What's it all mean? Hell I don't know. I was making it up as I went along just to see if I could do a comic in ink with no prior penciling or writing
EDIT: this comic is now available for sale on my website
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happy 4th, now read a damn comic.
Type your cut contents here.
What's it all mean? Hell I don't know. I was making it up as I went along just to see if I could do a comic in ink with no prior penciling or writing
EDIT: this comic is now available for sale on my website
July 4 2008, 22:05:57 UTC 3 years ago
Some minor quibbles: In the seventh panel of page one, gloobats looks a lot more like glodbats.
On page two, did you mean the booby lady to say, "What DID you say to me?" It look more like What DO.
I'd like to see this in color. I bet all them little monsters would really pop!
The cop driving the bus say, "What the is all"...
July 4 2008, 22:25:13 UTC 3 years ago
and yeah there are some little gramatical and spelling errors (she should be saying "did" not "do") but that's because I did the whole thing telling my self that I wouldn't correct anything until it was all done. a few spelling errors worked themselves into the story its self. "Xraxp Islald" was supposed to be "Xraxp Island" and the whole gooblats/glooblats distinction was a complete accident that wound up shaping the entire story.
I didn't notice the bus driver saying "what the is all the..." until you pointed it out. oh well.
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July 7 2008, 16:54:09 UTC 3 years ago
Kyle
July 8 2008, 00:32:26 UTC 3 years ago
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September 18 2008, 16:11:19 UTC 3 years ago
I'm reading through your archive, and this is my favorite comic so far. Very alien, but relatable. Smells like Kafka.
September 19 2008, 02:33:26 UTC 3 years ago
kafka huh? hmm.. hadn't thought of that but yeah, I can see it.